Sunday, 10 May 2015

Writing and Science learning

WALT write a creative response 

We will:
-use juicy verbs and adjectives
-still focus on our personal writing goal
-use the COMPLETE writing process this week

My goal is to use correct grammar. 
I need to work on this more.

The germinating seeds
Slime oozed out of what looked like a trap. Three bean seeds wrapping in their seed coat laid ready to burst into the world.
First the outer skin bursted, leaving the slimy layer behind to dry up and wrinkle.
A smooth slippery lightly coloured seed appeared.
A worm like stem then started slithering around the seeds. Fine, sharp hairs stood tall on the stem while gooey liquid seeped all around. Soon it grew strength, wiggling its way up to a standing position.

1 comment:

  1. Ryan dale awsome11 May 2015 at 10:26

    That Vidio was discussing it also was so gross and scincey