Friday, 8 May 2015

Writing

We have been focusing on our writing goals. Some of us choose to use 'Write About Us' for writing this week.

Ava's goal is to use correct punctuation (full stops, capital letters and ! exclamation marks) How do you think she went this week?



Kate's goal is to use correct punctuation (full stops, capital letters and ! exclamation marks) as well. How do you think she went this week?


Akshay's goal is to use correct punctuation (full stops, capital letters and ! exclamation marks) as well!! 
How do you think he went this week?


Mikaela's goal is to make sure it makes sense. How do you think she went this week?

Rebecca's goal is to try using a variety of sentences (simple, compound, and complex). How do you think she went this week?

7 comments:

  1. kate i like your writing but you got something wrong horses to play with christmas (horses)

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  2. At the end you might want to read it again Rebecca

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  3. I like your writing mikeala but some of it dusint make sense

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  4. What interesting topics!

    Kate- in your 2nd and 3rd sentences need punctuation or an added conjunction to make it make sense.
    Christmas horse is an interesting name.

    Mikaela- I agree with Tui's comment. Some of your writing doesn't make sense. Make sure you reread each sentence then put a full stop. I like the girl's do. I think it looks very pretty.

    Kelly

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  5. Wow Ava I like fire works wi hi awesome

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  6. I like your writing Ava but in they are very britte you have a captele letter in the sentence and Jose words

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  7. Rebeca what an inteting picture and Kate how would you get the rainbow magical pills

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